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Am si eu de facut o compunere in limba engleza despre profesoara mea...am făcut-o, dar nu stiu cat de corecta este. Ma puteti ajuta cu corectarea ei? Ofer 20 de puncte si coronița. Urgennnt!!!!


A person who has influenced me most is my romanian language teacher. She was my teacher for 4 years. She is someone I love and cherish very deeply.
My teacher, Ana, is of a medium height. She’s forty two years and she lives in Bucharest. She ia slim and has got medium blonde hair. My teacher’s face is round and friendly looking. She is small blue eyes and an expression full of kidness. She’s wearing all the time elegant outfits, I never saw her in a sports clothes . My teacher is an incredibly sensitive person who helps everyone in need. For example, she helped an orphanage on the eve of the holidays. However, she never seeks a reward for her kindness. In short, my teacher, Ana, is one of the people I admire. I think it has contributed a lot to my ability to show compassion and sensitivity to others and to my development.


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Am corectat si este foarte buna Sper ca te-am ajutat.

Este perfecta! Nu ai nici o greșeala! Dacă profa da note o sa Primești un 10